Archive for July 10th, 2013

Humble Bundle, Take 2

Last year, there was this thing. It was called the “Humble (ebook) Bundle.” The idea is it’s a pay waht you want model for a collection of ebooks, where the patron can adjust how much of what they are spending goes to either the creator, or one of a specific few charities. Last year’s collection was cool, and this year’s  selections are equally as interesting.

Cory Doctorow is the volunteer curator of the event, and here’s the promo video he has on his site.

The event only runs for two weeks, and it’s already half over! If you fall in the center of the Venn diagram of people that like [DRM Free!] ebooks, and like to support charities, here you go. Check out the Humble Bundle, but you’d better do it soon.

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Notes on Punctuation…

I’ve been working my way through a Lawrence Block collection (The Liar’s Bible, another compilation of his Writer’s Digest pieces from the 80s. “Hands Off!” is the specific piece, if you are inclined to read the whole piece.), and there was something that struck me.

… I know where I want a comma and where I don’t. I use punctuation for effect, not in obedience to some rule book or style sheet. I want a sentence to fall upon a reader’s inner ear in a particular way, and that’s why I punctuate a sentence as I do.

In the article, he’s talking about copyediting, and goes on to mention some other experiences of sentences being rephrased or rewritten entirely by some creative editors, but it’s the puctuation item that really spiked the meter for me.

I first heard the idea from Orson Scott Card a couple of years ago which, at the time, was a liberating revelation for me. Seeing it again from Block gives me the inclination to point and shout, “Yes, this!” Reading those lines, I reflected on a lot of the commentary/notes I’ve been making over the past six months on projects I’ve been given to workshop.

“Consider repunctuating for flow,” was one of the oft repeated comments I’ve been making, and just today I had an epiphany, an example to keep in mind. (It’s possible I heard this before,and just remembered it, but I digress.) Storytelling was originally an oral tradition. Punctuation developed as a means for facilitating the transition of the spoken word to the written. If you think about the story/novel/project that you are writing as something to be experienced aurally (to drop a Wendig, aka: “read your shit out loud”), consider how  you would naturally pause or place emphasis. Think of your work as a performance medium, and punctuate based on what you hear – not (necessarily) based on what a formal style guide might dictate.

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